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I have to agree with Maverick and Del on this one. The sounds do sound generic for default plugins and they don't really fit the genre. Presets good to use when you're learning how to make music. If you try to cram sound design in too, it'll make a pretty good song into an okay one. Find a nice preset pack and then find the sounds you think would fit. Listen to lots of similar music to what you're making. Pick sounds like that. Supersaws and plucks are very common in house, so if you're going to make electronic, those are essential to know how to make and tweak to your liking. Still, presets can still have good saws and plucks and much more that you can use while making music. It wouldn't be a bad idea to invest in a plugin like Sylenth. You'll be able to make much more electronic sounding sounds with it and it will bring your music up to a whole new level.

DJ-Zyzyx responds:

Isn't sylenth like $500? Pretty expensive

Not the best remix I've heard... You forgot a lot of things and there were a lot of wrong notes. I also feel like the same saw lead was used throughout the whole thing. Also, you could work on transitions a lot as they were really sudden. The mixing could also be greatly improved on. These aren't terribly hard to fix, but they kind of add up.

The sounds used sound a bit generic. Otherwise, not bad.

Irish-Soul responds:

I agree. This was one of my first songs. I am working currently to make a somewhat realistic song through GarageBand. Wish me luck :P

Not bad, you're getting better at this.

DJ-Zyzyx responds:

Lol I think this is pretty bad xD

Hmm... I have to be honest. I love this one, but I would have liked it so much more if it had taken a darker turn like in the preview. It goes from calm into a Hans Zimmer type horn blaring into some quick atmospheric arpeggios. I would have loved if it went into a sort of darker orchestral piece from there, or at least something along those guidelines.

That aside, this track is great! I love all of the different elements of the song that make a simple song seem so complex, while still being simple. (Making this was probably by no means simple). There's a lot of things in this that you don't hear often in progressive house. I also like how it switches from more of a minor key into a major one. The clashing notes at the beginning are a bit... interesting. It makes the chord progression more unique, while not taking away form the song. I have to admit, 1:10 gave me goosebumps. I just loved it. All of your tracks carry so much more emotion than mine do. I'm starting to get there, but every time I listen to one of your tracks, my songs are nothing :P

Overall, I love the atmospheric feel of it. I also love how you layered so many things together to make this so great. I would have liked to see it take a different turn like it did in the preview, but I can't complain. I expected a great song, and you delivered!

Hmm... I'm not sure if you understand what "Instrumental" is. Instrumental is basically a where a song is taken that has vocals, and turned into a song without vocals. This is better classified as a remake or remix. That aside, it's an interesting remake.

AlexIsAwesome500 responds:

I know, it's just by instrumental I meant using natural instruments.

Umm... Windfall is already instrumental. One thing you might want to experiment with is decay. It does a lot to make your sounds sound better. That's one thing to fix out of many. Keep going with music, you'll get better.

Lucky... F-777 commented.

Great cover! It doesn't sound like the original very much, but it does have it's own unique spin on it, which I quite like!

Miyolophone responds:

I really am lucky XD But on the other hand, he added your remix to his favorites. No such luck for me.

Yes, I had someone tell me that I sounded sort of constrained with my previous cover, and that I should do something with more of my personal touch. Honestly, I had a lot more fun doing it that way. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Hmm... That first lead... I would have liked it better if it was more of a square pluck. It sounds kinda distorted which makes the song sound a bit messy in my opinion. I find a song sounds clean and fresh if squares and sines are used more often than saws. Underlying supersaws can help with filling up the remaining space. Bass should fill up most of the space in a drop and should really carry everything else. Another thing I would do is always have it be gaining energy in some way or another. If more than four measures are repeated without any progression, it tends to sound repetitive. Also, try and make the second half of the song different in some way. This feels like the second half is the same as the first half. Otherwise, the rhythm is interesting and the melody is nice, just a bit repetitive.

DJ-Zyzyx responds:

Honestly I think the drop needs more power and the drums are absolutely horrible. Idk how to add better drums to Logic, but this beat is SO cringy. I need better samples :V

This is really good. Especially without any great VSTs. Just goes to show that you don't need a ton of great programs to make great music :)

Miyolophone responds:

Exactly :) My synths are really lacking, and the sounds I'm using are frustratingly inherently quiet, but that doesn't mean I can't make do...

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